Flash Point a 24 spin - off!

[BSG FAN 1990]

Hi cool site you've got here im new here and i wanted to post this a fan script i thought of just now no episodes as of yet but i will post one soon.

Ok first off here's my cast list for the series


Sarah Michelle Gellar As - Mitchelle Anders

Mitchelle Forbs As - Loran Henderson

Jason Dean As - Michale Owans

D.B Woodside As - Presidant Wayne Palmer

Eddie Murphy As - Drake Huckson


With


Powers Boothe As - Vice Presidant Daniels


Katie Stackoff As - Adele Henderson


Matthew Perry As - Depratment of Defence Advicer Jason Owans


And


Kiefer Sutherland As - Jack Bauer


I'll post the plot for season one soon enjoy the cast and ask me if there's any one not listed that you want to have in an episode or 2

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Prequel

Here's the prequel to the first season

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21 MONTHS AGO

Mitchelle Anders and her ex - husband Drake Huckson sit across a large wodden table in a meeting with a lawer named Fran Masson


FRAN MASSON
I can see why you would want to leave him miss Anders you make a goo case


DRAKE HUCKSON
What ever she says in that paper is a lie i am nothing but a good husband


MITCHELLE ANDERS
A good husband? All you do is sit round the house and leave me to do all the work and when i am called in by CTU you go off like a big angry 34 year old man!


They look at the lawer


MASSON
Well all i can say is case closed miss Anders is a free women now she can do what she wants when she wants


Fade to black


8 MONTHS AGO


Presidant Wayne Palmer sits at his desk as DOD advicer Jason Owans walks in


JASON OWANS
Mr,Presidant you wanted to se me?


PRESIDANT WAYNE PALMER
Yes Jason grab sit down


JASON
By the look on your face this is not good


WYANE
No it's not we could go to war in one year


JASON
With who sir?


WYANE
The war is with China


Fade to black


2 HOURS BEFORE DAY ONE BEGINS


Drake Huckson enters a large biulding called MYA known as a posible terrorist outpost he walks into a room with one women in it


BUFFY LORRIN
Drake i bet you are wondering why of all pepole i called you in


HUCKSON
Yea why?


LORRIN
We plan to attack D.C by uesing a missle called Strike Fast it's the one the govermant's been keeping under guard but we plan to take it and use it today



Fade to black



His dad was asasinated


His sister would not speek to him


And soon he will find that he is needed to save the world within 24 hours


But can he do it?


An all new season 


FLASH POINT COMING SOON

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Episode 1

Here's the first episode!

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THE FOLLOWING TAKES PLACE BETWEEN 04:00 P.M and 05:00 P.M

EVENTS OCURR IN REAL TIME


The camera pans over the bissy afternoon traffic and we zoom into CTU D.C


CTU D.C - 04:01:01

Mitchelle Anders walks up to her boyfriend Michale Owans


MITCHELLE ANDERS
Did you ask Bill yet?


MICHALE OWAN
No


MITCHELLE
Why not you promised me by today you where gonna tell him about us


MICHALE
Yea and i will i just got a posible threat to D.C


MITCHELLE
What kind of attack?


MICHALE
Hard to tell the message was all scrabled


At that moment Adele Henderson walks up to them


ADELE HENDERSON
Hey guys whats that?


MICHALE
A posible terrorist location


Bill Masson walks down from his office


BILL MASSON
Alright pepole listen up we just got orders from DOD a posible terrorist named Harmed Harmen is working here in D.C


MICHALE
This could be related to the chater i came across on the web


MASSON
What kind of chater?


MICHALE
I could'nt tell the message was messed up


MASSON
Get me that would ya?


MICHALE
Yes sir


MASSON
For the next tewnty four hours i want you all on this if you have a call to make do it now get back to work


They walk off 


04:05:04 - 04:05:05 - 04:05:07


04:10:59 - 04:11:00 - 04:11:01


WHITE HOUSE OVAL OFFICE 

Vice Presidant Daniels walks into the oval office as Wayne looks out the window


VP DANIELS
Sir CTU has picked up a posible threat to D.C


PRESIDANT PALMER
Where when?


VP DANIELS
Unknown acorrding to one of the agents the attack plan is massive on scale


PRESIDANT PALMER
My god is this related to the war we're at with China?


VP DANILES
We dont know much yet sir im calling DOD right now


Daniels walks out into the hallway


WHITE HOUSE HALLWAY - 04:12:03


Daniels brings out his cell phone to call DOD


JAMES HELLER(RIGHT BOX)
Yes mr.vice presidant what wrong?


VP DANIELS(LEFT BOX)
Sir CTU has tracked a posible attack on D.C


HELLER(TOP LEFT BOX)
When where?


VP DANIELS(BOTTEM RIGHT BOX)
Unknown sir all we know is the attack is going down today


HELLER(BOTTEN RIGHT BOX)
Thank you sir

The camera pans over to a outpost just outside D.C


OUTPOST 

Buffy Lorrin looks at the weapon now in her hands she calls someone


LORRIN(LEFT BOX)
Harmed it's me


HARMED HARMEN(RIGHT BOX)
Yes Buffy do you have the missle?


LORRIN(TOP LEFT BOX)
Yes i do when do you want me to attack?


HARMED(BOTTEM RIGHT BOX)
Not now attack in three hours call CTU and give them the miss lead


They hang up


04:15:57 - 05:15:58 - 05:15:59


04:21:21 - 05:21:22 - 05:21:23


CTU WOMEN'S WASHROOM - 04:21:24


Adele walks in on Mitchelle


ADELE
So you and Jason still going out?


MITCHELLE
Yea for five months now


ADELE
Does Masson know?


MITCHELLE
No not yet Jason's gonna take care of that see you on the floor


She waves at Adele and walks out Adele brings out her cell phone


ADELE(TOP RIGHT BOX)
Hey mom you ok?


LORAN HENDERSON(BOTTEM LEFT BOX)
No im not the pian is getting realy bad now


ADELE(BOTTEM RIGHT BOX)
Look i'll call doctor Manny and get you some more pills


LORAN(TOP LEFT BOX)
No i dont want anymore pills!


ADELE(BOTTEM LEFT BOX)
Yo need to take them you have to take them


Loran hangs up


ADELE
Mom?


Pan over to the white house


WHITE HOUSE - OVAL OFFICE

Mark Gibson Lorrin Hagson and Daniels try to come up with an attack plan on China


MARK GIBSON
What about an air to ground missle attack it'll show the enemy that we have a way of attacking them and to think twice before they attack us agian?


LORRIN HAGSON
No they'd see us coming


PRESIDANT PALMER 
Look we need to think of somthing that they will never see coming at them


VP DANIELS
What about a TGA attack it'll take out the enemy with all odds on us


HAGSON
What is TGA?


GIBSON
TGA is short for Toxic Gas Attack it's never been used and we hoped it never would be used


PRESIDANT PALMER
How long will it take to get them in the air?


VP DANIELS
Three four hours


PRESIDANT PALMER
Do it let me and the vice presidant have the room please


Gibson and Hagson walk out


PRESIDANT PALMER
Noah there's somthing your not telling me


VP DANIELS
There's no sure way of geting the tanks to China safely


Palmer looks out the window and then we fade to black


04:31:59 - 04:32:00 - 04:32:01


04:37:59 - 04:38:00 - 04:38:01


CTU DIRECTORS OFFICE


Jason walks in


JASON
Sir can i talk to you for a second?


MASSON 
if this is about you and mitchelle i know



JASON
And your ok with it?


MASSON
Son look it's not up to me as long as it does not corupt your work i have not problem with it


The phone rings


MASSON
Yea Adele?


ADELE(ON THE LINE)
Sir we just got a call from somone in D.C they clam to know about the attack


MASSON
Lets here it


The call plays


WOMEN
The attack is going down in the white house in one hour



JASON
Me and Mitchelle will take a team down there now 


MASSON
Do it


CTU LOCKER ROOM - 04:40:59


Adele Jason and Mitchelle walk into the locker room


JASON
Pepole listen up we just got a call from a women who clams the attack is donw at the white house lets move pepole


All three move out


04:41:02 - 04:41:03 - 04:41:04


04:57:12 - 04:57:13 - 04:57:14


The car comes to a stop outside the white house a guard walks up to Jason


JASON
My name is Jason Owans and these are Adele Henderson and Mitchelle Anders


GUARD
Sir what's going on?


JASON
We have confirmed that an attack is to go down within


A large blast goes off down the street they where at the wrong location

A box at the top right shows Palmer being rushed down to the bunker one on the bottem left shows everyone at CTU and one at the bottem right shows Buffy we zoom into that box


OUTPOST


LORRIN(TOP RIGHT BOX)
It's done


HARMED(BOTTEM LEFT BOX)
Good i'll be there soon good job


Fade to black


04:59:57 - 04:59:58 - 04:59:59 - 05:00:00

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