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Originally posted by dragon wench
a place to share beauty in all its complex and nuanced layers of expression

*bears his arse* - See it's beautfiul!

I haven't written poetry for years, the best I can muster is:

I went walking one day
found a bag
took it home and it worked as one would expect

Who thinks we need a new Haiku thread?

Originally posted by mental_nomad
Scadye,

See? ...hmmmmmmm .. I told you I was bad news to a thread.

YMOS
tommy

Hey nomad. Your poetry is awesome. Man, keep posting it...I really find it inspiring.

My friend, as you doubtlessly have seen by now....the mere existence of a thread on SYM invites spam...

Originally posted by Mr Sleep
*bears his arse* - See it's beautfiul!

I haven't written poetry for years, the best I can muster is:

I went walking one day
found a bag
took it home and it worked as one would expect

Who thinks we need a new Haiku thread?

Egad! Someone needs to take those magazines away from you before you hurt someone, Sleepy...

Originally posted by Chanak
Egad! Someone needs to take those magazines away from you before you hurt someone, Sleepy...

Ow, paper cut

I have even better ones:

I went down the shops
bought a plant
it grew

Really speaks to you, eh?

@mental_nomad, I am not intending to insult you, you are a good poet, I am however pants!

Exited a door
breathed some air
felt better
drunk some water
felt even better
piano fell on my head
didn't feel better

Took me hours that did!

Looked at a map of Wales
Saw a place I could pronounce
thought that was interesting

Looking at monitor
during my lunch hour
eventually I will stop and start work

Eating a sandwich
It has cheese in it
and probably some mad cow too

Works of genius! (no I am not drunk, just bored )

Originally posted by Mr Sleep
Looked at a map of Wales
Saw a place I could pronounce
thought that was interesting

Works of genius!

I don't say the quality of your poem, mind you. The subject, however...

I guess my works are just too new age, you oldsters need to move with the times!

Oldsters not moving with the times
like in this thread
right here

Genius I embody in every sentence
if you don't see this
you clearly don't understand my flow
at some point in the near future I will start working
and stop assaulting
your senses with this
load of drivel

Word, man.

Originally posted by Mr Sleep
I guess my works are just too new age, you oldsters need to move with the times!

What, new age!? A poem about Wales? Never!

Originally posted by Minerva
What, new age!? A poem about Wales? Never!

It is the new age
you know it in your heart
accept things as they are
and the new age will never be apart

Originally posted by mental_nomad
Scadye,

See? ...hmmmmmmm .. I told you I was bad news to a thread.

YMOS
tommy

LOL......*Hits Tommy with a pillow*......

*HUG*

You know better.....

@Sleepy adn BS....LMAO......you guys are too much

*brings out the eggnog (made with tequila of course ), hangs up the mistletoe, adjusts the fluffy pillows, and relaxes by the fire*

I think I just need to be infused by the spirit of the season...

*puts the Creed CD in the stereo system*

Originally posted by Scayde
@Chanak:.......I am posting this here, because there is no other place to post it.....

I Love "Hill of the Skull".......reading it takes me to a place I have never seen before, but now I do....It is so powerful....I am always left hungry for your next entry....

I am so glad that you like it, Scayde. Coming from you, it means more than I can say....*hug*

I finally added the demon's name to the glossary....LOL, I had a difficult time sounding that one out.

Originally posted by Chanak
*brings out the eggnog (made with tequila of course ), hangs up the mistletoe, adjusts the fluffy pillows, and relaxes by the fire*

I think I just need to be infused by the spirit of the season...

*puts the Creed CD in the stereo system*

Mmmm.....*settles back on the pillows.*

**mistletoe kiss **
I just read your new post in the "Hill of the Skull".....It was so intense...I was moved beyond words..

*snuggle*

Originally posted by Chanak
I am so glad that you like it, Scayde. Coming from you, it means more than I can say....*hug*

I finally added the demon's name to the glossary....LOL, I had a difficult time sounding that one out.

LOL..I am glad.....I seldome run across a word I can't make out, ....but that one had me stumped

Originally posted by Scayde
Mmmm.....*settles back on the pillows.*

**mistletoe kiss **
I just read your new post in the "Hill of the Skull".....It was so intense...I was moved beyond words..

*snuggle*

Dammy...

*snuggles up to Scayde* That you can see what I saw in the words of the story means that I was successful at my work...which is nothing more than taking what is inside of me, and giving it to the reader...

*kiss* @Scayde

Originally posted by Scayde
LOL..I am glad.....I seldome run across a word I can't make out, ....but that one had me stumped

LMAO

It had me stumped, too. I kept forgetting to add her name to the glossary...I can be terribly absent minded at times.