Originally posted by Tybaltus Where is this lurker in the woods in relation to Acolytus and Gurney?
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O= Magus and the rest.
Hmm...but I was expecting to be either completely right
or completely wrong. Not a little bit of both.
Do you think it would be better that way?
Because it is my first time writing a story and feedback makes the story better. That way I can (if possible) take an other path later on.
Don't be afraid to tell.
Originally posted by Rob-hin
Do you think it would be better that way?
Because it is my first time writing a story and feedback makes the story better. That way I can (if possible) take an other path later on.
Don't be afraid to tell.
And no, not computer problems...
No, that's not what I meant! You should roleplay Serena as you see fit. You can force situations sometimes...but never force characters to act as they usually wouldn't just for the sake of pretty drama. I wrote what I did because I (and also Magus) expected that Serena intended to carry out her dread deed alone, and wouldn't tolerate interference from anyone else. However, she seems to trust Magus more than either of us imagined, opening up options he previously thought were no longer available.
Not computer problems, huh? That's no good. I hope everything's alright...
Lost Souls: A bereft lover. A masterless familiar. Friends gone their separate ways. Time marches on, and destiny heralds the meeting of comrades old and new. Can they find what they're seeking? Or will the search bring them only more pain?
Seconded. I hope everything will end up alright, whatever is wrong. I think I speak for everyone here, that we wish for the best, because he is commrade to us all in this story, and in this forum.
“Caw, Caw!” The call of the wild calls you. Are you listening? Do you dare challenge their power? Do you dare invade? Nature will always triumph in the end.
[color=sky blue]I know that I die gracefully in vain. I know inside detiorates in pain.[/color]-Razed in Black
Originally posted by Magus I wrote what I did because I (and also Magus) expected that Serena intended to carry out her dread deed alone, and wouldn't tolerate interference from anyone else.
The thing is, she'll do anything to reach her goal. And since she knows (powerfull) people are looking for her, she'll need your help. If she likes it or not...
But about your last post, she didn't mention the item and she tries to keep it a secret. She only ran her hand over it unkowingly. You could sence a vibe it emits, but she won't show it.
Could you alter your post?
Ah...I see. My bad. I got so caught up in my realization that I misconstrued the details of what happened. I'll edit.
Lost Souls: A bereft lover. A masterless familiar. Friends gone their separate ways. Time marches on, and destiny heralds the meeting of comrades old and new. Can they find what they're seeking? Or will the search bring them only more pain?
There, the edit's finished. Sorry I took so long on it. I was considering expanding on my post in addition to cutting off the part in question, and just realized that Azmodan had already posted. So, instead of posting something new in my old post, I'll just incorporate the overflow into my next post. I would write something now, but it's getting kind of early...uh I mean late.
Lost Souls: A bereft lover. A masterless familiar. Friends gone their separate ways. Time marches on, and destiny heralds the meeting of comrades old and new. Can they find what they're seeking? Or will the search bring them only more pain?
I think "the others" should show up now before they get left behind. Also, for the good of the story, Rob needs to make a decision and decide what he's going to do with Gurdio.
My opinion: It's regrettable, but leaving a hanging character like that for the remainder of the story won't do anyone any good, and I don't think it'd make Rudar feel any better either. If anything, I think he'd feel better if he knew that his role in the story was taken of.
That's just my take on the matter. How about everyone else? Yay? Nay?
Lost Souls: A bereft lover. A masterless familiar. Friends gone their separate ways. Time marches on, and destiny heralds the meeting of comrades old and new. Can they find what they're seeking? Or will the search bring them only more pain?
For what is it to die but to stand naked in the wind and to melt into the sun? - Khalil Gibran
"We shall fight on the beaches. We shall fight on the landing grounds. We shall fight in the fields, and in the streets, we shall fight in the hills. We shall never surrender!" - Winston Churchill
Due to unforseen circumstances, I am leaving the story, and Gamebanshee, for good.
I enjoyed writing with you all, and wish you the best of luck in finishing it.
Thank you all for being friends.
“Caw, Caw!” The call of the wild calls you. Are you listening? Do you dare challenge their power? Do you dare invade? Nature will always triumph in the end.
[color=sky blue]I know that I die gracefully in vain. I know inside detiorates in pain.[/color]-Razed in Black
Lost Souls: A bereft lover. A masterless familiar. Friends gone their separate ways. Time marches on, and destiny heralds the meeting of comrades old and new. Can they find what they're seeking? Or will the search bring them only more pain?
Sorry, I didn't mean to be rude, Rudar. Welcome back. I see you've begun by bringing us a fresh perspective on the situation in-story, as you promised back when the story had just started.
Also, please excuse my misunderstanding. It's been months since you've posted regularly...so it didn't seem likely that you'd be back. I trust everything's well IRL, then?
Lost Souls: A bereft lover. A masterless familiar. Friends gone their separate ways. Time marches on, and destiny heralds the meeting of comrades old and new. Can they find what they're seeking? Or will the search bring them only more pain?
Yep, everything is (pretty much) OK. There were some reasons for me not to post the last couple of weeks and the main reason (I regret to say) was laziness
But I have lots of new ideas for the story, so I am really looking forward to post more....
Broken promises
"They made us many promises,
more than I can remember.
But they kept but one -
They promised to take our land...
and they took it"
Ha, ha, well done. I look forward to writing Magus's response. Did you guys communicate by Instant Messenger, then?
Lost Souls: A bereft lover. A masterless familiar. Friends gone their separate ways. Time marches on, and destiny heralds the meeting of comrades old and new. Can they find what they're seeking? Or will the search bring them only more pain?
Hmm, maybe I should give it a shot some time, then. It certainly opens up some unique possibilities. But then again, I'd probably get bogged deliberating on exactly what Magus would say. The precise, deliberate way in which he speaks doesn't just roll off the tongue, so to speak.
Lost Souls: A bereft lover. A masterless familiar. Friends gone their separate ways. Time marches on, and destiny heralds the meeting of comrades old and new. Can they find what they're seeking? Or will the search bring them only more pain?
Anyway, my latest post is up. And he just might do it too.
Lost Souls: A bereft lover. A masterless familiar. Friends gone their separate ways. Time marches on, and destiny heralds the meeting of comrades old and new. Can they find what they're seeking? Or will the search bring them only more pain?
