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Originally posted by Tybaltus
Where is this lurker in the woods in relation to Acolytus and Gurney?

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O= Magus and the rest.

Hmm...but I was expecting to be either completely right
or completely wrong. Not a little bit of both.

Do you think it would be better that way?
Because it is my first time writing a story and feedback makes the story better. That way I can (if possible) take an other path later on.
Don't be afraid to tell.

And no, not computer problems...

Originally posted by Rob-hin

Do you think it would be better that way?
Because it is my first time writing a story and feedback makes the story better. That way I can (if possible) take an other path later on.
Don't be afraid to tell.

And no, not computer problems...

No, that's not what I meant! You should roleplay Serena as you see fit. You can force situations sometimes...but never force characters to act as they usually wouldn't just for the sake of pretty drama. I wrote what I did because I (and also Magus) expected that Serena intended to carry out her dread deed alone, and wouldn't tolerate interference from anyone else. However, she seems to trust Magus more than either of us imagined, opening up options he previously thought were no longer available.

Not computer problems, huh? That's no good. I hope everything's alright...

Seconded. I hope everything will end up alright, whatever is wrong. I think I speak for everyone here, that we wish for the best, because he is commrade to us all in this story, and in this forum.

I'm sure he appreciates it guy's.

Originally posted by Magus
I wrote what I did because I (and also Magus) expected that Serena intended to carry out her dread deed alone, and wouldn't tolerate interference from anyone else.

The thing is, she'll do anything to reach her goal. And since she knows (powerfull) people are looking for her, she'll need your help. If she likes it or not...

But about your last post, she didn't mention the item and she tries to keep it a secret. She only ran her hand over it unkowingly. You could sence a vibe it emits, but she won't show it.
Could you alter your post?

Ah...I see. My bad. I got so caught up in my realization that I misconstrued the details of what happened. I'll edit.

There, the edit's finished. Sorry I took so long on it. I was considering expanding on my post in addition to cutting off the part in question, and just realized that Azmodan had already posted. So, instead of posting something new in my old post, I'll just incorporate the overflow into my next post. I would write something now, but it's getting kind of early...uh I mean late.

I think "the others" should show up now before they get left behind. Also, for the good of the story, Rob needs to make a decision and decide what he's going to do with Gurdio.

My opinion: It's regrettable, but leaving a hanging character like that for the remainder of the story won't do anyone any good, and I don't think it'd make Rudar feel any better either. If anything, I think he'd feel better if he knew that his role in the story was taken of.

That's just my take on the matter. How about everyone else? Yay? Nay?

Makes no difference to me.

Allow me to explain.

Rudar has promessed me improvement. So he'll start posting more often again.

...ok thats it.

Lets see how it goes from here.

Due to unforseen circumstances, I am leaving the story, and Gamebanshee, for good.

I enjoyed writing with you all, and wish you the best of luck in finishing it.

Thank you all for being friends.

???!

I don't know Tyb's reason for leaving, but he has left GB before and came back after 2 weeks or so.

If you read this Tyb, I hope you can give us an explanation for this, because we are all a bit stunned by this sudden announcement....

Indeed...

Sorry, I didn't mean to be rude, Rudar. Welcome back. I see you've begun by bringing us a fresh perspective on the situation in-story, as you promised back when the story had just started.

Also, please excuse my misunderstanding. It's been months since you've posted regularly...so it didn't seem likely that you'd be back. I trust everything's well IRL, then?

Yep, everything is (pretty much) OK. There were some reasons for me not to post the last couple of weeks and the main reason (I regret to say) was laziness

But I have lots of new ideas for the story, so I am really looking forward to post more....

This last post I a joined effort between me and Rudar.
It took us pretty long but we're proud of it.

I, unfortunately, had to write Acolytus out of the story...

Ha, ha, well done. I look forward to writing Magus's response. Did you guys communicate by Instant Messenger, then?

Yep, it was pretty fun.
It was like Serena (and later Gurney) were really talking with Gurdio.

Hmm, maybe I should give it a shot some time, then. It certainly opens up some unique possibilities. But then again, I'd probably get bogged deliberating on exactly what Magus would say. The precise, deliberate way in which he speaks doesn't just roll off the tongue, so to speak.

It shows.
But thats a good thing.

You flatter me...

Anyway, my latest post is up. And he just might do it too.