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im planning to make my first real dungeon and dm it. ive done a rew small ones before but this willbe quite big. so far i have that the charicters are sent to a town to help with a problem of some sort. when they get there they find a city ravaged by war. the dwarven inhabitants have been attacked by an evil elven wizard. the map is that of osgiliath (liked the map too much) so it has a river across it. dwarves control the east and elves the west.

anyway on reaching the city they will make contact with said dwarves, either by going to them or getting 'saved' by them ( rouge vampires roam the eastern city). when they do they will be told they must defeat the ecil wizard in his tower (keep with me here) they can get there by boat or bridge. at the end of the meeting the dwarves are attacked by elves and monsters (were wolves maybe?)

they must fight/sneak their way to the boats or across the rives, through hte western city and to the tower. uppon reaching it they must fight hterough obsticals to reach the top.

ill go one if anyone is interested. but i could use help. what can i improve so far? thanks (p.s. number of chariccters is about 4-6 any level)

Have you thought about undead elves? I mean maybe the Elf wizard(necromancer) kills his own people and uses them to attack the dwarfs. The normal elves could be being threatened to join his army or become an undead.

What lvl. is the party? Maybe the Necromancer is a lich? Perhaps he bribes the party upon reaching him with an insane amount of richs or a position/item of power.