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My bio

Posted: Sun Feb 10, 2002 4:09 pm
by Rob-hin
So, I finally wrote my bio. Please let me know what you think.
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Rob-hin had it all, a nice home, lots of friends and parents who loved him. The farm was doing well and he had everything he wanted.

He was a fine young man back then. Good looks and always friendly to everybody, even strangers. And working on the fields with his dad made him strong.
He didn’t have a care in the world.

But trouble lurked, and in a way least expected.
His friends grew envious. Rob-hin started getting into fights, people thought it was because of his ego. “His fathers money got to him.”, “He thinks he is better then us.” they said. None of this was true.

As years want by, Rob-hin rarely left the farm. Afraid of the people in the village, he dedicated all of his time to the farm. It wasn’t enough though, a feeling inside of him grew. He felt the needed to prove himself, to his parents, the villagers but mostly to himself. So he decided to leave. Hardly saying goodby to his parents he left at the break of dawn.

On his travels he met a strange old man, his eyes where small and his skin was a differend colour then his. Rob-hin joined him, carrying his bags for him and helping him any way possible. They rarly spoke but he learned a lot from him. Though the man, named Ijangi, was very old in human years, he was still able to defend himself, in a very strange way. He didn’t use a sword but his walking staff. A rare but wonderous fighting style.

After the demise of Ijangi who died of old age, Rob-hin continued his travels alone. Attracted by rumours of a guild called “Blades of the Banshee” he started looking for this new guild unsertain why.

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Ps. I you see errors also let me know. My office XP is having trouples with engish. :rolleyes:

Posted: Sun Feb 10, 2002 4:53 pm
by Pebz
Nice :D
He was a fine young man back then. Good looks and always friendly to everybody, even strangers. And working on the fields with his dad made him strong.


*cough*charisma*cough* ;) :p

Posted: Mon Feb 11, 2002 12:02 am
by Xandax
He was a fine young man back then. Good looks and always friendly to everybody, even strangers. And working on the fields with his dad made him strong.
This one does not go together with your charisma of 8 - that is for sure :)
Also combined with the fact that "you" get along with all - does not go well with a charisma of 8 :cool:

Posted: Mon Feb 11, 2002 4:51 am
by Rob-hin
No, but as the story goes further. He gets into a lott of trouble and rearly leaves the house. Hardly sais goodby to his parents, barly talks to Ijangi etc.

Thats why I start of with "He was a fine young man back then", Rob-hin is very to himself and doesn't talk to other people because of the experiences in his youth.

I forgot go mention in the bio that he wares old durty clother over his armour, because he doen's want to be rememberd of the times when he was living in a weathy family.


edit: I do appreciate your input. And if you disagree I will change it.

Posted: Mon Feb 11, 2002 5:06 am
by Tamerlane
I like it, especially because of the start.
Originally posted by Rob-hin
Rob-hin had it all, a nice home, lots of friends and parents who loved him. The farm was doing well and he had everything he wanted.
Most bio's IMO go overboard on the childhood/whole upbringing part which tends to make me skip the biography entirely.

As you may of guessed I love the concise format. :)