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Since it seems that there are people who read my story on regular basis, I decided to finally make the discussion thread for the story.

So, in this thread everybody can post comments, questions and even some ideas if someone thinks that something should be altered or added. But remember this: even if you post here some ideas of how the story should continue, I'm not promising to use your ideas. Only very good ones may take their way to my story.

So, please make some comments and question. I'm more than happy to reply to those.

Wow nice stories Kipi Write something about Poland
It's my story, but in polish: [url="http://http://www.wasteland.yoyo.pl/forum/viewthread.php?forum_id=22&thread_id=57"]http://http://www.wasteland.yoyo.pl/forum/viewthread.php?forum_id=22&thread_id=57[/url]

[QUOTE=kamilos-55]Wow nice stories Kipi Write something about Poland
It's my story, but in polish: [url="http://http://www.wasteland.yoyo.pl/forum/viewthread.php?forum_id=22&thread_id=57"]http://http://www.wasteland.yoyo.pl/forum/viewthread.php?forum_id=22&thread_id=57[/url][/QUOTE]
Hmmm....
Maybe it could be possible...

And thanx for the comment

Oh, and the next part of the story will be somewhat delayed, but it will be much longer one. So, everybody, be patient

I read it yesterday, and it really has a lot of potential.

But it is like you just write and submit, don't you check for typos and grammatical errors before hitting 'submit reply'?

And i am just saying this because i really think it is a shame that such a great fanfic story is chipped by something like:

Kipi wrote:Withing a seconds each one was dead, as he had took them by suprise. Seems like no-one had excepted that he was already inside.

But the story is really really great.

I love Fallout Fanfic, so this is a breath of fresh air for me.

Fix the grammars, but keep writing!

Woozaii wrote:I read it yesterday, and it really has a lot of potential.

But it is like you just write and submit, don't you check for typos and grammatical errors before hitting 'submit reply'?

And i am just saying this because i really think it is a shame that such a great fanfic story is chipped by something like:



But the story is really really great.

I love Fallout Fanfic, so this is a breath of fresh air for me.

Fix the grammars, but keep writing!

I know, there is so many typos there
I promise to clean up next time I'm able to stay online longer, now I don't have much time since leaving back to base in less than 30 minutes...

Also, the story will continue, I've been working on it at times, I just have had few problems on it (basically, how to get on from the current situation...).
I also try to post new part when I can get to internet next time.

Okay, first section of the new part has been added to the story (HURRAH!!)

Also, some heavy grammaric and spelling check has been made.

So, enjoy!!