Alternate Romance Scripts for female PCs
Gwalchmai: I thought you did an excellent job at Edwin, so I hope you stay around. (Darkpoet is not trying to push you out, if he does, just let me know and I'll deal with him) *hug*
Darkpoet: Have you any dialogue ideas/thoughts you'd care to share with us?
We are specifically looking at male npc's with a female pc. (Mazzy doesn't count)
Edit: Ah, yes, I didn't know he was married, thought just in love. Thanks for the addition
Edit: Loner72: Very passionate! Good job
And with my usual over abundance of smilie faces, I shall be heading out for the day. Carry on good people
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Darkpoet: Have you any dialogue ideas/thoughts you'd care to share with us?
We are specifically looking at male npc's with a female pc. (Mazzy doesn't count)
Edit: Ah, yes, I didn't know he was married, thought just in love. Thanks for the addition
Edit: Loner72: Very passionate! Good job
And with my usual over abundance of smilie faces, I shall be heading out for the day. Carry on good people
[ 05-18-2001: Message edited by: Vivien ]
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Hey, Darkslave. You don't think they force their slaves to be eunuchs, do they?
Minsc, while ever the devoted puppy, probably wouldn't be a good love interest. (Though I can hear him on the night of consummation shouting "Ha, Ha! Great fun!!") However, he would be a valiant defender of his leader's honor. Particularly in the face of Edwin's lecherous advances. However, scripting for this would have to take place early, as Minsc eventually leaves a party with Edwin in it.
Minsc, while ever the devoted puppy, probably wouldn't be a good love interest. (Though I can hear him on the night of consummation shouting "Ha, Ha! Great fun!!") However, he would be a valiant defender of his leader's honor. Particularly in the face of Edwin's lecherous advances. However, scripting for this would have to take place early, as Minsc eventually leaves a party with Edwin in it.
That there; exactly the kinda diversion we coulda used.
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Ooooh yes, Loner, love it!
A suggestion for a Valygar/Kivan declaration of love (lust?).
V/K: "N" , Are we resting? If you'll permit, I have a confession to make, would you walk with me a ways so that we may talk?
P.C a) (if still undecided about Anomen) Please don't think I read too much into your intentions, but ..... you know that our friendship has certain.....limits.
b) Yes, let us.....talk.
c) You insult me by your insinuations Valygar/Kivan, please do not bother me further.
Valygar/Kivan:
a)I understand, as we travel together, I increasingly find that I can scarcely control my passions while in your presence, but be assured I will always respect your wishes.
b)I feel uncertain how to express myself, but I can no longer ignore my desires. When I gaze upon your beauty I am reminded of the she-wolf, fierce, proud yet also ever gentle and protective. I long for you to share my bedroll, to watch the stars as your breath joins mine in their cold light. I am driven to distraction by the magic of your presence "N", and I can think only of feeling your body next to mine. Please, spend the night with me, I can contain my ardour no longer.
c) You wound me beyond belief. I am in love with you "N", I can no longer travel with you if those are your sentiments. leaves party.
P.C: (to b only) a) Valygar/Kivan, I am flattered by your feelings for me, but I'm sorry, I'm unable to return them.
b) Valygar/Kivan, my pulse quickens to hear you speak so. Let us loose our bedrolls here in this quiet spot, we can join the others when the night gives way to dawn.
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A suggestion for a Valygar/Kivan declaration of love (lust?).
V/K: "N" , Are we resting? If you'll permit, I have a confession to make, would you walk with me a ways so that we may talk?
P.C a) (if still undecided about Anomen) Please don't think I read too much into your intentions, but ..... you know that our friendship has certain.....limits.
b) Yes, let us.....talk.
c) You insult me by your insinuations Valygar/Kivan, please do not bother me further.
Valygar/Kivan:
a)I understand, as we travel together, I increasingly find that I can scarcely control my passions while in your presence, but be assured I will always respect your wishes.
b)I feel uncertain how to express myself, but I can no longer ignore my desires. When I gaze upon your beauty I am reminded of the she-wolf, fierce, proud yet also ever gentle and protective. I long for you to share my bedroll, to watch the stars as your breath joins mine in their cold light. I am driven to distraction by the magic of your presence "N", and I can think only of feeling your body next to mine. Please, spend the night with me, I can contain my ardour no longer.
c) You wound me beyond belief. I am in love with you "N", I can no longer travel with you if those are your sentiments. leaves party.
P.C: (to b only) a) Valygar/Kivan, I am flattered by your feelings for me, but I'm sorry, I'm unable to return them.
b) Valygar/Kivan, my pulse quickens to hear you speak so. Let us loose our bedrolls here in this quiet spot, we can join the others when the night gives way to dawn.
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Thanks, Dark Poet!
hope I didn't over do it though, I keep worrying about being censored.
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hope I didn't over do it though, I keep worrying about being censored.
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@DW, that dialogue I wrote is pretty much interchangeable with whichever other NPC, I just used Valygar since that was who we were talking about originally.
I like the Kivan/Valygar confession of love... but the bit about feeling each others' heartbeats seems a little to similar to this bit of Anomen dialogue:
"I want to listen to your heartbeat and I want you to feel mine..."
Don't know if it really matters, just thought I should mention it. I think maybe the different NPCs should express themselves in different way, is all...
@loner, I love the decision dialogue It's sooo Anomen
Re Minsc etc., I believe most of the arguments about him have already been aired on the Best male NPC body thread
Ok, the Harem currently has 5 members... so, I don't see why we can't have 2 slaves...
Hey DP, who let you out of your SYM cage?
I like the Kivan/Valygar confession of love... but the bit about feeling each others' heartbeats seems a little to similar to this bit of Anomen dialogue:
"I want to listen to your heartbeat and I want you to feel mine..."
Don't know if it really matters, just thought I should mention it. I think maybe the different NPCs should express themselves in different way, is all...
@loner, I love the decision dialogue It's sooo Anomen
Re Minsc etc., I believe most of the arguments about him have already been aired on the Best male NPC body thread
Ok, the Harem currently has 5 members... so, I don't see why we can't have 2 slaves...
Hey DP, who let you out of your SYM cage?
Who, me?!?
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You're right Georgi, I'd forgotten about the heartbeat thing, although it clearly wedged itself in my consience .
Yes, I'll deleat that line, we don't want Valygar or whomever sounding like Anomen, that would defeat the purpose of an alternate romance.
Yes, I'll deleat that line, we don't want Valygar or whomever sounding like Anomen, that would defeat the purpose of an alternate romance.
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Yes, I rather like the idea of willing slaves. BTW, has anyone else noticed just how willing and dedicated these two are? I hadn't realised that slavery held such strong appeal......I think it must have something to with our "magical armour."
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