Vengeance of the Heart -- Discussion Thread

Rudar Dimble · Post by **Rudar Dimble** » Thu Feb 06, 2003 5:32 am

good map! that's pretty much how i had it in mind too!

Rob-hin · Post by **Rob-hin** » Thu Feb 06, 2003 8:31 am

Euh, CM

I think you've misread some things there.
Rudar's character took out only one of the barbarians, one of the two by the door. There are still 4 left.

One of these 4 is just about to attack your character.
I wrote a small intro and the rest you your characters fight is yours, this way you have all the freedom you need. Write it any way you'd like. He is no match for your character.

I'll post the fight of my character hopefully today, or tomorrow.

Rudar wrote: "Seeing that the 3 barbarians are taken care of ....."
By this he ment that they could not attack him, since we were ABOUT to fight them. So not that they were dead already.

So you see, the fight is far from over.

I've changed my post a little, since I think I understaind what confused you.

Please edit or delete your post too.
Thanx

Tybaltus · Post by **Tybaltus** » Thu Feb 06, 2003 8:40 am

So should I wait for Fas to edit his post?

Awww....I wanted a piece of the action.

And I got no interaction between the paladin and druid

Rob-hin · Post by **Rob-hin** » Thu Feb 06, 2003 8:45 am

You can post the fight of your character and Greppun with the barbarian now if you'd like.
All of the fights need to be finished before you can sit down and talk.(don't you think?

)

Just consider CM's post as not posted since it's wrong.

Tybaltus · Post by **Tybaltus** » Thu Feb 06, 2003 9:33 am

Ill see what I can do.

Rob-hin · Post by **Rob-hin** » Thu Feb 06, 2003 11:59 am

@ all

Nice fight.

Before I started this story, the fights seemd hardest to me. But it went very good.

I made a small mistake with the type of weapons the barbarians had, but thats a small thing."

Nice going!

CM · Post by CM » Thu Feb 06, 2003 12:04 pm

Well not much of a fight for my Paladin.

Aegis · Post by **Aegis** » Thu Feb 06, 2003 3:23 pm

Now... I bet your all wondering where Lilth and Ae'siir are... Well, just wait a couple more hours. I have to pull my post off my e-mail (which is down currently) and then they'll be around.

Tybaltus · Post by **Tybaltus** » Thu Feb 06, 2003 3:30 pm

Originally posted by Aegis
Now... I bet your all wondering where Lilth and Ae'siir are... Well, just wait a couple more hours. I have to pull my post off my e-mail (which is down currently) and then they'll be around.

Yeah, actually I just asked Rob about that.

Well no worries, man. The story has just begun!

Aegis · Post by **Aegis** » Thu Feb 06, 2003 8:24 pm

Well, as par usual, my post was lost. A shame, I was rather proud of it. So, I'll will be taking sometime to write a new one. For this story, I don't intend to post one liners and such. every post will be a post of quality...

Rob-hin · Post by **Rob-hin** » Fri Feb 07, 2003 3:37 am

Sorry about your writing Aegis.
I always make sure I got a back up before I post.

@CM
Hey, you started talking. I followed your lead.

Aegis · Post by **Aegis** » Fri Feb 07, 2003 2:03 pm

Ok, it's up, and as close the original as I could make it.

Rudar Dimble · Post by **Rudar Dimble** » Fri Feb 07, 2003 2:09 pm

****ing hell!!! Great post Aegis

Tybaltus · Post by **Tybaltus** » Fri Feb 07, 2003 7:09 pm

OK, Aegis, Im only going to say this once, so I hope its clear:

You Are the Man, Aegis....You are the man!

Great post...I actually said "Word" out loud when the baddies got the knives in their heads and guts and whatnot...just awesome, man.

Aegis · Post by **Aegis** » Fri Feb 07, 2003 10:04 pm

This is more a pet peeve then anything else, but when writing, can we try to keep it in a past tense, just so it flows. We had a slight problem with this in Magus' stories as well.

Tybaltus · Post by **Tybaltus** » Fri Feb 07, 2003 10:08 pm

Originally posted by Aegis
This is more a pet peeve then anything else, but when writing, can we try to keep it in a past tense, just so it flows. We had a slight problem with this in Magus' stories as well.

Sure. Ill keep an eye out in the future. I have a tendency to make tense errors, though, so if I miss something, just kindly point it out to me, and Ill be happy to fix it. Righty righty.

Magus · Post by **Magus** » Sat Feb 08, 2003 12:12 am

Looks like I missed a fight. Regrettably, I was having some computer problems. As in my computer wouldn't boot.

It's all good now though. Well, mostly at least.

I'll just have to come up with something to explain why Magus didn't join in.

Rob-hin · Post by **Rob-hin** » Sun Feb 09, 2003 9:28 am

Originally posted by Aegis
This is more a pet peeve then anything else, but when writing, can we try to keep it in a past tense, just so it flows. We had a slight problem with this in Magus' stories as well.

I didn't see this post until now.
So I didn't kno you suggested that.
But I'll do it from now on.

About my post:

Aegis, your characters have actually met the "bad guy". But she is a bit confused and paranoia so she won't always make sence.

Just thought i'd mention.

Magus · Post by **Magus** » Thu Feb 13, 2003 1:40 pm

A little clarification:

The cantrip and the man stumbling through the door were unrelated events. Also, only someone who was carefully observing Magus would have noticed him casting it. And if he (or she) did, it would only seem like incoherent mumbling unless he knew something of magic himself.

@Rob-hin: If you could, could you include the result of the cantrip in your next post? Didn't want to jump to conclusions or anything.

Rob-hin · Post by **Rob-hin** » Thu Feb 13, 2003 3:12 pm

Originally posted by Magus
A@Rob-hin: If you could, could you include the result of the cantrip in your next post? Didn't want to jump to conclusions or anything.

Sure thing, good thinking.
I got ideas for it while i was reading your (very good) post.

I was curious to how everybody would react to her entrance.
You all read my mind. BTW She didn't cast a spell or anything, there is something that just grabs you. But you all noticed that yourself.

Don't think I'll get to it today though.