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Rob-hin · Post by **Rob-hin** » Wed Oct 27, 2004 3:35 pm

Good stuff, keep it up.

Golden Lion 86 · Post by **Golden Lion 86** » Wed Oct 27, 2004 4:35 pm

Good Post. I assume this is where Kitty the Druid comes in?

PS. You folks really like katanas, don't you? Two already!

Yeltsu · Post by **Yeltsu** » Wed Oct 27, 2004 4:37 pm

Ahhhhh! KATANA! (I love the pronounciacion sooo much) KATANA! KATANA!

Plus it's probably the most romantized sword type ever. And it looks cool

werebeargoddess · Post by **werebeargoddess** » Wed Oct 27, 2004 4:58 pm

Do you want me to post my next bit on the story itself, or shall I pm it to cipher like before?

ok, I didn't notice cipher's post. So if it is ok, I'll post my part.

ungor451 · Post by **ungor451** » Wed Oct 27, 2004 5:47 pm

Ok, I see we're on our way, I'll get cracking on my part it should be in by thursday

cipher · Post by **cipher** » Wed Oct 27, 2004 6:59 pm

you must of misunderstood werebeargoddess, what i meant was I will aprove the post and you can post them after that.

I know that was probably a bit confusing, do you understand now?

I'll try to be more clear in the future.

werebeargoddess · Post by **werebeargoddess** » Wed Oct 27, 2004 9:45 pm

I'm So sorry! I didn't realize we were still pming to you! Sorry! won't happen again!

Sytze · Post by **Sytze** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 5:06 am

Euhmm. Like I said before, I think it's better if we post our own sotry parts. This way it can be posted at any time, without waiting for cipher. Plus you can edit it, if you think the story isn't running smooth or something like that. Just my two cents though.

But I agree that we need an oder in which to post. Like: cipher, golden lion, asriel, me, werebeargoddess and then ungor.

ungor451 · Post by **ungor451** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 10:16 am

Just here to say that my part has been sent to cipher

cipher · Post by **cipher** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 3:14 pm

[QUOTE=Sytze]Euhmm. Like I said before, I think it's better if we post our own sotry parts. This way it can be posted at any time, without waiting for cipher. Plus you can edit it, if you think the story isn't running smooth or something like that. Just my two cents though.

But I agree that we need an oder in which to post. Like: cipher, golden lion, asriel, me, werebeargoddess and then ungor.[/QUOTE]

Ok, it seems everyone has good intensions so i will allow people to post there own parts. I got the idea from another board story but once I think about it it doesn''t make muck sence.

I will post ungors part that he pmed to me and after that you all are free to post your parts as long as you keep in the posting order.

cipher · Post by **cipher** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 3:34 pm

ungors part is now posted, and let me commend you for writing a very good part.

I especially liked how you indroduced the Bul'nur caves, very clever.

werebeargoddess · Post by **werebeargoddess** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 4:06 pm

so, are we using the posting order that Sytze listed?

cipher · Post by **cipher** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 4:31 pm

Posting order

cipher, sytze, werebeargoddess, ungor, golden lion, asriel

Next up is Golen lion 86

Golden Lion 86 · Post by **Golden Lion 86** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 8:03 pm

I just got home from University. I will begin immediately.

Golden Lion 86 · Post by **Golden Lion 86** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 9:59 pm

Post-Post Analysis

My part is up, enjoy!

I left to the other writers' discretion what new weapons were chosen from the armory, as well as to werebeargoddess what exactly Kitty was drinking.

I did make Rethne's drink an ale, but what evil assassin, no matter how small (and hence vulnerable even to small quantities of alcohol), drinks non-alcoholic beverages?

Hmm, anything else I need to clarify? Probably. I made no special remark about the wolf, because having faced bears, and even great cats in combat, a wolf is like a giant, grey, long-snouted Pug. Man, I love Pugs!

Ok, well, for now, some parameters to go by, for my guy anyway (here I go again with my obsession with character sheets!):

Relationships with team-mates:
Salem: Wizard, and as such is a novelty. Commands respect and trust.
Duncan: Fellow warrior and also older. Commands respect and admiration. Expect a discussion about combat tactics.
Rethne: Man, I don't like her. She does strike me as fascinating, since a miniature woman is a lot for a young Gladiator emerging from an isolated environment to... umm... digest (No, I won't eat you if you betray us!

). She also commands a certain degree of respect, being older, and a skilled assassin, after all.
Kitty: I like Kitty. She healed my wound, she is close to my age, she is a good person, and she is attractive! Need I say more? I see a lot of potential for friendship, if werebeargoddess sees it that way too.
Phraen: I LOVE PUGS!!!!

Sytze: As a good person, I like him, also as a fellow warrior and a man of age and wisdom. Our relationship was not developed in this edition, but it is definitely positive.

That's it for now, Stan out!

ungor451 · Post by **ungor451** » Fri Oct 29, 2004 9:15 am

A good part GL and a well done to everyone so far!

About the drink, perhaps you missed it, but Rethne was drinking wine, which im pretty damn sure is alcoholic.
I can see why Stanislav is on such bad footings with Rethne, but, her greeting was still quite friendly, if somewhat rash, by many outworlder standards

asriel next then

Golden Lion 86 · Post by **Golden Lion 86** » Fri Oct 29, 2004 11:55 am

[QUOTE=ungor451]A good part GL and a well done to everyone so far!

About the drink, perhaps you missed it, but Rethne was drinking wine, which im pretty damn sure is alcoholic.
I can see why Stanislav is on such bad footings with Rethne, but, her greeting was still quite friendly, if somewhat rash, by many outworlder standards

asriel next then[/QUOTE]

Sorry about the drink.

Sytze · Post by **Sytze** » Fri Oct 29, 2004 2:39 pm

Another thing; you might not want to rush the story so much. I had a bit planned for Kitty and me on our way, but that is something I have to skip, I guess.

Maybe I'm the only one who thinks like that and if so, then please correct me

Yeltsu · Post by **Yeltsu** » Fri Oct 29, 2004 2:53 pm

I agree with Sytze.

I am slowing the story down now, and exploring some of the character personalities.

Golden Lion 86 · Post by **Golden Lion 86** » Fri Oct 29, 2004 4:38 pm

[QUOTE=Sytze]Another thing; you might not want to rush the story so much. I had a bit planned for Kitty and me on our way, but that is something I have to skip, I guess.

Maybe I'm the only one who thinks like that and if so, then please correct me

[/QUOTE]

Sorry about that

. To quote David Chapelle: "I F$@&ed up!"