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Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 3:46 pm
by ik911
Will the Hawaïan
Ever return to this thread?
His thread in a way.

Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 5:07 pm
by Ned Flanders
Bad for your blender
gravel and muck you mention
Have a warranty?

Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2005 6:13 am
by Vicsun
Expired Contract
I am very deep in debt
My life is hellish

Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2005 6:53 am
by arno_v
Haiku is difficult
So the Yoda thread is better
You'd better go there

Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2005 9:29 am
by ik911
See how easy 'tis?
Anyone can make haikus
Without trying hard.

Posted: Sun Feb 13, 2005 7:14 am
by Miscreant
sorry for leaving!
i forgot i started this
i seldom post here

But these are so good!
so here are a few guidelines
for the best haiku

a good first rule is
use seasonal elements
subtle can be good

also remember
the last line is important
make sure it's striking

above all have fun
funny can rival poignant
so make your own style :)

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Taishizen!
anata ni kaita
ha ga chitteru

hey hey yo nature!
this is a shoutout to you
a leaf drifts to earth...

Posted: Sun Feb 13, 2005 3:11 pm
by giles337
:) :D :eek:
:rolleyes: :confused:
:p :mad: :(

Posted: Sun Feb 13, 2005 3:19 pm
by C Elegans
[QUOTE=giles337]That much is true, Ik
But traditional haiku has
five, seven, five form
:D [/QUOTE]

It also includes
a word denoting season;
ends with reflection

Posted: Sun Feb 13, 2005 6:40 pm
by Witch King
Spring blooms, Spam blossoms
Budding Vicsuns with great sigs
Newbies lose the war

Posted: Sun Feb 13, 2005 9:48 pm
by Opalescence
Newbies will fight on
In the summer and winter
United we cower

Posted: Mon Feb 14, 2005 6:18 am
by ik911
Winter is tricky
The grass is pale like icecreams,
This is so easy... :o