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haiku

Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2005 5:45 am
by Miscreant
watch infomercials
a limited time offer
call and order now

Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2005 6:12 am
by Vicsun
What's this thread about?
Should we add our own haikus?
Elaborate please.

Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2005 2:48 pm
by giles337
Quite Interesting
A thread for thoughtful posters
In Japanese Verse

Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2005 6:01 pm
by Miscreant
lets keep the spam out
otherwise anything goes
good luck and have fun

Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2005 6:12 pm
by Luis Antonio
(can I ask for a method in Hai kai?)

burn on the sun
scorched inside
wounds that never heal

Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 4:21 am
by Rob-hin
What are the rules again
to write a good haiku
not to look stupid.

(5, 7, 5?)

Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 9:53 am
by Vicsun
Five syllables first
The second line has seven
The third one has five

Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 1:36 pm
by Locke Da'averan
i'm gonna try this
all have some fun you hear me
i will shut up now

Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 2:50 pm
by ik911
I have a question.
Is it very Hawaïan,
This Haiku business?

Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 3:08 pm
by Luis Antonio
Tell you I will
Haiku is japan poem
Strange, nice.

Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 3:22 pm
by ik911
Why does Hawaïan
Come up with such a thread then?
("Strange, nice" is just two)

Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 3:24 pm
by Ned Flanders
Secrets of the world
Fuzzy dice are organic
Snakes have no armpits

Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 3:32 pm
by ik911
Oft' the first two lines,
describe an observation,
The last writes wisdom.

Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 9:45 am
by Vicsun
The sky is oft blue
A is usually A
They aren't out for you

Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 9:55 am
by Macleod1701
On Halo he ruled all
Master Chief is my Idol
Often guns may kill

Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 12:46 pm
by ik911
I looked on the net
And found haikus with of kinds
of forms and content

Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 12:53 pm
by giles337
That much is true, Ik
But traditional haiku has
five, seven, five form
:D

Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 1:40 pm
by ik911
It's hard to find one
With the five seven five form
On the internet

Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 3:31 pm
by Ned Flanders
Put in a blender
Yummy rodents and road kill
Healthy snacks for all

Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 3:39 pm
by ik911
The gravel and muck
I found in my roadkill snack,
Are not good for me.