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After recieving news George Lucas has started creation on another Star Wars movie script about the creation of lightsabers and the force and the prophycy. Although he has only started a small peice of it the news on weither or not if he will actually make it into a movie has not been released he could be just doing it for fun. We will have to wait and see. Here is what he has so far.

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Star Wars
Episode 0:
Birth of the Force
By: George Lucas

A long time ago in a galaxy far,
far away….

It is a time of creation and the discovering of secrets. Two humans and three creatures have discovered a hidden power called, the Force. This power cannot be seen by an average creature or person.

One creature and two humans have found the secret to form a mystic blade made of a of light and heat combined together forming a very strong and dangerous weapon known as a lightsaber.

A two humans named Revan Haze and Palpatine Kordun have created two of the colors. Revan forming a blue blade, Palpatine forming a red blade and a small creature known as Yoda Halmonto has constructed a green blade.

They eventually taught there powers of the Force and their ways on how to create lightsabers to many others. The people broke up into different sides one the lightside also known as the Jedi. Another called the dark side also known as the Sith.

A wise Jedi named Bastila Tareth eventually married Revan. But the other Jedi believed that love could lead down a path to the darkside. Bastila and Revan created a child the Jedi tore Bastila and Revan apart forcing them to give their child up for adoption.

Revan knew of the perfect person to give their child to, Shmi Skywalker, Revan Haze’s cousin. Bastila and Revan were divorced after words from the Jedi Councils orders. They had no other choice, it was either that or be exiled. Revan eventually gave into the dark side, he became too dangerous that the Jedi sent Bastila to capture him, bring him back and erase his memory.

On Revan’s journey to the dark side he brought a follower, Malak Thorn. Together they found hidden Star Maps of a secret weapon powerful enough to destroy an entire planet it was known as the Star Forge.

Eventually Malak grew weary of Revan’s strength that he turned on the Sith Lord. In one move the apprentice became the Master. Now Sith Lord Malak is the Jedi’s biggest threat. They must stop them. The great Republic ship known as the Livieth was attacked and boarded by Sith troopers and destroying it from the inside.

Two escape pods managed to make it on the nearby planet, Taris. One escape pod held two men one called Draith Core and the other Carth Onasi. The second escape pods held three Jor, Seith and Bastila. Malak then received news of this and is constructing a plan on how to capture them….

Carth: Finally. Your awake, you’ve been out for the whole day. I was starting to worry about you.

Draith: Whe-where am I? What’s going on?

Carth: Take it easy. I’m Carth Onasi. We’re on the planet of Taris. Our escape pod crashed here, some Sith troopers managed to show up but luckily I had enough time to find this abandon apartment, we were long gone when the troopers arrived. Now if you don’t mind me asking. Who are you?

Draith: I’m Draith Haze.

Carth: Nice to meet you. Anyways, now that we know who we are we have to rescue Bastila.

Draith: Bastila? Who’s that?

Carth: You’re kidding right? You must have really injured yourself in that crash.

Draith: Yah maybe. I think I hit my head.

Carth: What makes you think that?

Draith: Well, the fact that my head hurts.

Carth: Oh, yeah of course. But to answer your question, Bastila is one of the Strongest Jedi in the galaxy and she is in grave danger. The Sith are looking for her and they will do what ever it takes to get her.

Draith: Wait. If she’s a Jedi can’t she take care of herself?

Carth: I’m sure she can but we have to make sure she makes it. Now, are you going to help me or just sit around while I search for her?

Draith: I wouldn’t just sit around here and just have you search for her. I’m not that kind of a person.

Carth: Good. I’m glad that I didn‘t get stuck with a lazy person.

Draith: Yeah, I wouldn’t do something like that. I’d get too board.

Carth: Oh. So your basically just doing to keep occupied. Is that it?

Draith: Yep.

Carth: Oh well. At least your helping now lets get a move on.

(Draith and Carth leave the room and enter the hallway)

Sith Trooper #1: I knew you took those supplies from the Sith base! I demand you give them back or suffer the consequences!

Twi-lek Civilian #1: I have no idea what you’re talking about. Please you there help me!

Draith: This is none of our concern.

Carth: What!

Sith Trooper #1: See. Now there is somebody who know’s he isn’t strong enough to defeat a Sith Trooper.

Draith: I never said I couldn’t take you. I just have a long trip ahead of me.

Sith Trooper #1: Of course you do.

Sith Trooper #2: Yeah, this guy probably couldn’t even win a fight verse a paazak deck.

Sith Trooper #1: Probably not. Anyways back to business. Hand it over alien scum!

Draith: You just said the wrong thing to the wrong person.

(Draith kills the Sith Troopers)

Twi-lek Civilian #1: Thank you for your help. I really appreciate it.

Draith: Don’t thank me. Just give me a couple hundred credits.

Twi-lek Civilian #1: What?

Draith: I said give me a couple hundred credits.

Carth: What are you doing? You can’t do this leave him alone.

Draith: No! I saved his life. I spent my time helping him out! I deserve a reward!

Twi-lek Civilian #1: But I don’t have any credits?

Draith: Then I’ll have to kill you.

Carth: What! No! Leave him alone!

Draith: Shut up Carth!

Twi-lek Civilian #1: I-I-I can help you with some work you need done! I can clean your apartment for you!

Carth: No. It’s okay. Just go on and get out of here. You don’t have to give us anything.

Draith: What!

Twi-lek Civilian #1: Thank you! Thank you so much! Have a nice day.

Carth: No problem. You too.

Draith: Now how do you expect to earn those credits back?

Carth: What is wrong with you? I can’t believe you would do that to an innocent person!

Draith: Yeah, believe it or not it just happened. I do what I want when I want.

Carth: You know what? You can’t, there are laws on this planet. And there are Sith looking for us and Bastila right now! We can’t keep hidden if your off threatening civilians and troopers!

Draith: Don‘t lecture me, Carth. See the problem with you is that you are too kind and if your too kind then people start to push you around and walk all over you!

Carth: You know what…never mind. We don’t have time to argue. We have to find Bastila and get off this planet.

(Carth walks away)

Carth: There’s the crash site. Now if we can just find some clues we can-

Canderous: Psst. You two, come over here.

Draith: Who are you and what do you want?

Canderous: My name is Canderous Zoth. Now, I’m guessing you are trying to find the Jedi that crashed in the escape pods. Am I right?

Carth: Yeah.

Draith: What do you know?

Canderous: Alright. I know we all want to get off of this planet. But we can’t due to the docking bay code right now. Now that’s not going to change for a couple of months, which is too long to me. So I’m going to make you guys an offer.

Draith: We’re listening.

Canderous: I know were the Jedi is. If I help you get her, then you help me get off this hell hole of a planet.

Carth: What’s the catch? Why don’t you do this yourself?

Canderous: The catch is, that we will have to break in and steal the Ebon Hawk. I would do it myself but…I can’t take on more than twenty bounty hunters.

Draith: I say lets go for it.

Carth: Wait. So if you help us and we help you then we all get to leave this planet?

Canderous: Yeah.

Carth: I’m not sure.

Canderous: How about I let you keep the ship afterwards?

Draith: I think lets take the offer.

Carth: I’m still not sure.

Draith: Listen, we mine as well try because eventually the Sith will discover that we’re here. Why not try and leave before it’s too late?

Carth: I guess you’re right.

Canderous: Excellent. Now, in order to get her you have to win a swoop race. Now, since I’m betting you guys don’t have any credits so you can sign up, luckily I know some people who can get you in. Their names are Mission Vao and Zaalbar Freer. They are in the Cantina tell them that Canderous sent you. They know the plan, I went through it with them. Oh, and in case you aren’t that good at swoop racing I hooked up a Booster Engine to increase the speed. I’ll meet you two at the race.

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Fyi

To be clear. I found this on the internet. And my accuracy with this information is only %60. I'm not sure weither this is actual info. But even if it's not I thought you would enjoy to see other stories of Star Wars people have been coming up with. I believe it to be real George Lucas script. I want to hear what the rest of you think about this? Please, share your ideas with eveybody.

This should be in SYM.

I think it's not carrying much water, to put it simply.

This sounds like hearsay and a case of "If it is on the Internet - it must be true".
There have long been rumors of an EP:0 after the production of EP3, but according to most moviesources I've read it was supposed to be more about Yoda and his rise. I so stronlgy doubt that KOTOR-series would ever ever be tied directly to the movies by G.Lucas and Lucas Art but only by the KOTOR series. (If not for anything else, then the huge timespan there is between the game and the movies)


Anyways - Hill is correct in the topic moving, so that is hereby done. Topic moved to SYM.


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Easily disproven. All you have to do is look at the time periods. Revan was not around at the same time as Yoda or Palpatine. Considering Revan, Bastila and Carth were all a part of the Old Republic.

And before the logic of Star Wars being Luca's to decide upon, he is notorious for pre-approving all SW stories in the EU, and games, thus, he would not change SW canon (and by that, I refer only to story, not things like Greedo shooting first).

Seeing as I'm not a big follower of StarWars, I didn't know much about time periods, however there was one major part...

Revan knew of the perfect person to give their child to, Shmi Skywalker

Now, she had her child made from medichlorines (or however you spell it) not from adoption.

Also, the numerous spelling mistakes and gramatical errors more than prove this is not an official document.

Bastila tareth? Malak thorn? Revan Haze? Palpatine Kordun? Yoda Halmonto?
Not only time differencesbut look at the names... cnaderous was changed to from canderous ordo to canderous zareth i tihnk. its also Bastila Shan. time period, names, grammar... and also: Why would lucas let out an un finished script before the product was released? this is grade A baloney (with a little mustard hold the mayo), God created the internet for Pathological liars, such as the 'author' of that script.

If it is a first draft it would have errors.

A first draft of things all have errors. And in the Star Wars movies they nver said Anakin SKywalker was created from midiclorians. They just said that he didn't have a father. And I'm betting that there is a reason Shmi doesn't mention anything about because from the KOTOR games Revan is evil.

There are too many obvious errors, names being completely wrong, and:

For revan to have given Shmi a baby from himself and Bastila, both he and bastila would have to be about 4035 years old... not even yoda, the oldest char. could do that., besides that doesnt work with the KOTOR II story line.

Frankly, I think the script is a bunch of bull. Now, I don't play any of the games, but I distinctly remember Shmi telling Qui-Gonn in Ep.1 that she had carried Anakin herself, not adopted him. Also, I doubt that it was Palpatine who created the red lightsaber (I could be wrong- again, I don't play any of the games, and I don't read many of the books, so I could be completely wrong on that). He wasn't the first Sith Lord, after all.

[QUOTE=Darth Reveck]To be clear. I found this on the internet. And my accuracy with this information is only %60. I'm not sure weither this is actual info...[/QUOTE]

Then don't post it as you've done and claim it's fact. It isn't. It's pure rumor. There is no such thing as "60% accuracy." There's only accurate, and inaccurate.

We had a similar discussion in another message thread. A rabid, self-important Star Wars fan wants to write a script for a new Star Wars movie. He wants other people to believe it's real, and he might even be deluded enough to believe he can convince someone like George Lucas to use it. He's a wannabe. And pardon me for being blunt, but if you believe a crappy script like that is real, then you must be pretty desperate to see another Star Wars movie.

Oh dear...

:laugh: Oh my... I don't buy the story for one second. George Lucas couldn't possibly have written that; it's so bad it's actually hillarious...

Not to mention the insane amount of misspelled words and some serious plot confusion (both minor and major).

No, I'm sorry, but I think it's obvious no-one would ever possibly grab that hook; not even I, and I'm known to be extremely naive and probably dying for a KotOR movie.

I'm sorry, this is just too ridiculous... All the reasons have already been mentioned.

I think I hit my head.
What makes you think that?
Well, the fact that my head hurts.

Ah, well, at least it gave me a good laugh.

Heh, it's a nice enough idea but that's all it is. A bunch of KOTOR 1 elements mixed with Episode 1 to get something that meshes into a script. Of course there are all those inaccuracies though.
At least half of that script is just from dialogue scripts at the start of KOTOR 1 and this 'Draith' character just the PC. Even the encounter from outside the apartment is directly taken from KOTOR.
I would at least hope Lucas would create something completely original rather than a direct copy, though after all the mentions that Episode III was the last SW film it wouldn't seem likely that another was to be made so soon anyway.

Yeah I don't think it is real either. Time line and charactor grouping is off. I collect the comic wich follows the series pretty good. CHeck-em out for a great StarWars read into the worl of Lucas.

isn't this script the first convo you have with Carth Onasi on Telos in KOTOR I? and yoda,Shmi,Palpatine are part of the "New Republic" series.....Revan,Malak,etc... are part of the "Old Republic" series which is set 4000 years before Episodes 1-6....even if it was Episode 0 yoda and Revan couldn't have been the one's who found the "force".....if you listen to the convo in KOTOR I when you find the first star map it says it was created 10,000 years before the Republic was founded....and I may be mistaken but the Republic was founded at the verge of hyperspace travel,and the force was first introduced thousands of years before the Republic was founded.....so in order to make Revan Anakin's father him,Bastilla,Shmi,yoda etc...would all have to be over 20-30,000 years old.

[QUOTE=Darth_Juro]isn't this script the first convo you have with Carth Onasi on Telos in KOTOR I? and yoda,Shmi,Palpatine are part of the "New Republic" series.....Revan,Malak,etc... are part of the "Old Republic" series which is set 4000 years before Episodes 1-6....even if it was Episode 0 yoda and Revan couldn't have been the one's who found the "force".....if you listen to the convo in KOTOR I when you find the first star map it says it was created 10,000 years before the Republic was founded....and I may be mistaken but the Republic was founded at the verge of hyperspace travel,and the force was first introduced thousands of years before the Republic was founded.....so in order to make Revan Anakin's father him,Bastilla,Shmi,yoda etc...would all have to be over 20-30,000 years old.[/QUOTE]
The first convo you have with Carth is on the Endar Spire; then you talk to him on Taris. You never talk to him in KotOR I on Telos; that's KotOR II. Sorry to be a jerk and correct you on that part. Also, Yoda, Shmi, and Palpatine aren't part of the New Republic; that's all the tail-end of the Old Republic. Revan and Malak were 4000 years previous, like you said. And "For over a thousand generations, the Jedi were guardians of peace and justice in the old Republic." How long is a generation? I've always thought it was around 25 years, which sounds about right considering that the Republic was supposed to have been formed somewhere around 25,000 years before the movies (and in KotOR, it is mentioned that the Republic is formed around the time hyperspace travel was discovered, right).

[QUOTE=dj_venom]Seeing as I'm not a big follower of StarWars, I didn't know much about time periods, however there was one major part...

Revan knew of the perfect person to give their child to, Shmi Skywalker

Now, she had her child made from medichlorines (or however you spell it) not from adoption.

Also, the numerous spelling mistakes and gramatical errors more than prove this is not an official document.[/QUOTE]
Well, Shmi never said that; Qui-Gon assumed it. But one would think Shmi would know the difference between her son not having a father and her son being adopted, so yeah. And the spelling mistakes/grammatical errors alone should sell it as a crap version. George Lucas may be a dingus, but one'd think he knows what a spellchecker is.

[QUOTE=VonDondu]We had a similar discussion in another message thread. A rabid, self-important Star Wars fan wants to write a script for a new Star Wars movie. He wants other people to believe it's real, and he might even be deluded enough to believe he can convince someone like George Lucas to use it. He's a wannabe. And pardon me for being blunt, but if you believe a crappy script like that is real, then you must be pretty desperate to see another Star Wars movie.[/QUOTE]
ROFL. Die blunten Frau VonDondu. My German bites.

[QUOTE=Xandax]This sounds like hearsay and a case of "If it is on the Internet - it must be true".
There have long been rumors of an EP:0 after the production of EP3, but according to most moviesources I've read it was supposed to be more about Yoda and his rise. I so stronlgy doubt that KOTOR-series would ever ever be tied directly to the movies by G.Lucas and Lucas Art but only by the KOTOR series. (If not for anything else, then the huge timespan there is between the game and the movies) [/QUOTE]
I remember between episodes 1 and 2, I was on bored.com I think, and someone had found the "supposed" script for episode 2. I showed it to a friend, and he thought it was hilarious. I couldn't even read it, it was so dumb. It was mostly about the Mandalorians, who apparently hail from a planet called Concorde Dawn. The entire script proved to be wrong, of course. The spelling, as I recall, wasn't nearly this atrocious, though.

The thing that stuck out with me, is the whole mixing of KOTOR characters "discovering" the force. Anyone who's played the game would know that's false. What gives? Bah, I'm hungover, too much confusion for me right now.

[QUOTE=Chimaera182]The spelling, as I recall, wasn't nearly this atrocious, though. [/QUOTE]

That's the one thing I have never understood about scammers and the like. Why is it they must give way things with poor grammar and spelling. Such things as phising, the act of sending bogus emails to gain passwords, is how they have great planning, a good reason, the right images, but then they do something stupid like having too confused with to, or there, their and they're mixed up.