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werebeargoddess · Post by **werebeargoddess** » Fri Dec 10, 2004 4:44 pm

I'll ahve my part up in a bit.

Golden Lion 86 · Post by **Golden Lion 86** » Fri Dec 10, 2004 4:52 pm

[QUOTE=hyaline]I did some research on Ligers and in all the resources I've checked they are pretty much consistant with the height of Ligers being around 12ft (being around the tallest) and weighting around 900-1200 lbs.

Your numbers for your were-liger seem a bit stretched, could they be reduced?[/QUOTE]

You mean the 8'4, and 800 lbs? That's as low as I am willing to go for a big cat Hybrid form (Lost ability to fully shift to Human. It's in the Biography). As for the 15ft, 2000 lb Liger he shifts into, it is a bit above average (though 1500 lb Ligers have existed), but not unattainable for Ligers.

Golden Lion 86 · Post by **Golden Lion 86** » Fri Dec 10, 2004 5:22 pm

I read your part, and it's good. I was thinking tht there is ease to a 3 person party. You don't have to wait for weeks for the rotation to be over.

A few notes, though, if I may:
-Ligers are by no means common. There is a 100% probability that Ligers have occurred in nature, but Ligers are otherwise almost always a product of zoos, though they were originally not a deliberate attempt at genetic combination.
-Ligers do not exist in the wild, and thus do not come into contact with any other animals. This is to say that they don't really hate Bears, because Ligers don't have an established pattern of natural behavior.
-Bears don't get along with Tigers, but they often ignore each other, since an encounter can prove fatal to both (the Bear generally gets killed, and if the Tiger has severe enough wounds, he can't hunt very well and starves)
-This particular bear was actually out to steal my kill, unconcerned, at the moment, anyway, about any particular balance of forces.

Just thought I'd point these out, as the first three are not commonly known, and the last one was within my mind, and I might not have explained it very clearly. Hyaline, you're next again.

hyaline · Post by **hyaline** » Sat Dec 11, 2004 8:03 am

My post is up, enjoy

Golden Lion 86 · Post by **Golden Lion 86** » Sat Dec 11, 2004 2:41 pm

Werebeargoddess, would you like the next part, or should I do it? I know I went second last time, but you joined before I did, so the turn is rightfully yours.

werebeargoddess · Post by **werebeargoddess** » Sat Dec 11, 2004 3:14 pm

If you have thought of something to write, then go ahead. I think the order that we had is good: hyaline, you, then me.

Golden Lion 86 · Post by **Golden Lion 86** » Sat Dec 11, 2004 5:54 pm

Deal! I'll post it soon.

Golden Lion 86 · Post by **Golden Lion 86** » Sun Dec 12, 2004 12:34 am

The part is posted. Sorry I took so long. I hope you enjoy. It is kind of long and has a lot of dialogue, but I did as best I could without deciding on the course of the story. I don't yet know where it's going, and I think Hyaline should decide, because he began the story.

hyaline · Post by **hyaline** » Sun Dec 12, 2004 6:01 am

I'm not really sure where this story is going, when I started it I never really had a long term plot in mind.

Hmm...maybe one of you have an idea that could be shared? If not continue the story as you seem fit, this is after all a combined effort.

werebeargoddess · Post by **werebeargoddess** » Sun Dec 12, 2004 9:21 am

It's a nice part.

I was kinda thinking they could run into the Tiefling next. btw, does he have a name? I was thinking that Jena and Leonis could run into the Tiefling, then continue to track the aura she's been following. I was going to have the aura belong to the tiefling himself, but then I realized he was no longer near the town.

hyaline · Post by **hyaline** » Mon Dec 13, 2004 4:55 am

No, he doesn't have a name.

werebeargoddess · Post by **werebeargoddess** » Mon Dec 13, 2004 4:48 pm

Then what are we going to call him? We can't really go around calling him "hey, you" or "tiefling" now, can we?

edit- oh, do you mind if we run into the tiefling, or do you want to have him run into them in your post?

hyaline · Post by **hyaline** » Tue Dec 14, 2004 4:46 am

It doesn't matter what he is called, make up a name for him if you wish or perhaps your character could give him one since he never really had one, being alone an all.

And yes you can introduce him in your part.

werebeargoddess · Post by **werebeargoddess** » Tue Dec 14, 2004 7:19 pm

How about we call him Morhau?

hyaline · Post by **hyaline** » Tue Dec 14, 2004 7:58 pm

very well, good name

werebeargoddess · Post by **werebeargoddess** » Tue Dec 14, 2004 8:07 pm

Alright then. I'll try to get my part up now, otherwise, I'll have it up by the end of the week.

werebeargoddess · Post by **werebeargoddess** » Tue Dec 14, 2004 9:12 pm

Okay, got my part up.

Golden Lion 86 · Post by **Golden Lion 86** » Tue Dec 14, 2004 9:30 pm

Excellent part. I like the way you worked in the tiefling, in the forest. Of course, you know, as in all my other posts, I am going to point out that my character is not so-and-so

Sorry I keep doing this, but bear with me. My guy has never heard of tieflings, and has never seen nor encountered one. He would, therefore, not react in a hostile manner, unless the tiefling were armed and threatening. My guy would have probably pinned him as "Strange Elf", if anything. My guy's dislike for werebears stems from the murder of his parents. Since he does not have experience with tieflings, he cannot hate them. I just don't want him to come off as a bigot.

Also, you forgot a [ on one of the Italics signs, so you might want to change that, because it italicizes the whole text after it. Also, while doing that, could you please alter my guy's reaction to the Tiefling? You can leave it as is, if you wish, but I request that you make that change.

Of course, you have, and have always had, the right to ask the same of me for my parts. If I play Jena out of character, let me know. Thank you.

werebeargoddess · Post by **werebeargoddess** » Tue Dec 14, 2004 9:57 pm

okay, I'll change it. Could you pm me a link to the House of Drow on WOTC? I can't get to it from bioware now.

werebeargoddess · Post by **werebeargoddess** » Tue Dec 14, 2004 10:04 pm

made the changes.