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Will the Hawaïan
Ever return to this thread?
His thread in a way.
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Bad for your blender
gravel and muck you mention
Have a warranty?
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Expired Contract
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My life is hellish
Vicsun, I certainly agree with your assertion that you are an unpleasant person. ~Chanak

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Haiku is difficult
So the Yoda thread is better
You'd better go there
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See how easy 'tis?
Anyone can make haikus
Without trying hard.
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sorry for leaving!
i forgot i started this
i seldom post here

But these are so good!
so here are a few guidelines
for the best haiku

a good first rule is
use seasonal elements
subtle can be good

also remember
the last line is important
make sure it's striking

above all have fun
funny can rival poignant
so make your own style :)

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Taishizen!
anata ni kaita
ha ga chitteru

hey hey yo nature!
this is a shoutout to you
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:) :D :eek:
:rolleyes: :confused:
:p :mad: :(
Mag: Don't remember much at all of last night do you?
Me: put simply.... No :D
Mag: From what I put together of your late night drunken ramblings? Vodka, 3 girls, and then we played tic-tac-toe and slapped each other around.
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[QUOTE=giles337]That much is true, Ik
But traditional haiku has
five, seven, five form
:D [/QUOTE]

It also includes
a word denoting season;
ends with reflection
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Spring blooms, Spam blossoms
Budding Vicsuns with great sigs
Newbies lose the war
Come not between the Witch King and his prey, or he will not slay thee in thy turn, but will bear thee away to the houses of lamentation, beyond all darkness, where thy flesh shall be devoured, and thy shrivelled mind be left naked to the lidless Eye.
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Newbies will fight on
In the summer and winter
United we cower
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Post by ik911 »

Winter is tricky
The grass is pale like icecreams,
This is so easy... :o
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