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Demortis · Post by **Demortis** » Fri Apr 29, 2005 9:27 pm

then lets just skip him for now, and let him get back in when hes posten more. if its alright with everyone

werebeargoddess · Post by **werebeargoddess** » Sat Apr 30, 2005 10:26 am

Fine with me. That would make it my turn, I believe?

Yeltsu · Post by **Yeltsu** » Sat Apr 30, 2005 12:29 pm

Go right ahead then WBG

awaiting next part with trepidation

werebeargoddess · Post by **werebeargoddess** » Sat Apr 30, 2005 9:28 pm

Why would there be trepidation?

I'm not that bad a writer, am I?

Demortis · Post by **Demortis** » Sat Apr 30, 2005 10:52 pm

im looking foreward to it, i kinda feel bad because i feel like im bringin the story down with my monk.

Yeltsu · Post by **Yeltsu** » Sun May 01, 2005 1:39 am

@WBG: Not trepidation as in fearing that it might be bad, rather trepidation in knowing that it will be good, and I can't wait to read it.

Sorry if I made you think I don't like your writing, you know I do. I was just trying to say it more elequently

@demo: Don't feel bad man, the drunken bug is great, we needed some comic relief in the story

Demortis · Post by **Demortis** » Sun May 01, 2005 12:36 pm

well i thought id be that, everything was getting to serious

Demortis · Post by **Demortis** » Mon May 09, 2005 4:52 pm

WBG, you still workin on it or have things come up? just wonderin, havent heard anything for a while so im just curious.

werebeargoddess · Post by **werebeargoddess** » Mon May 09, 2005 5:09 pm

I'm busy with school right now, but I'll work on it.

Dunno if I can get it up this weekend, 'cause I'm going sailing. But I'll get it up this weekend if I can.

Demortis · Post by **Demortis** » Mon May 09, 2005 5:23 pm

well i was kinda figurin that, but didnt know, thats why i asked. just at your own time, but im sure we would like updates, and where the smeg is GL?

Yeltsu · Post by **Yeltsu** » Tue May 10, 2005 7:33 am

I hate school right now....

I'll be done with the hard stuff in about a month or so, and then I can go back to writing...

Demortis · Post by **Demortis** » Wed May 11, 2005 3:02 pm

i understand completely(sp?), so dont worry

Sytze · Post by **Sytze** » Sun May 29, 2005 9:32 am

Ack, I had totally forgotten about this. Well, that and I've been incredible busy. My sincere apologies.

I will try to contribute to this story, should it still be alive and, more importantly, if people are still willing to continue it. We've lost cipher and ungor over time and I haven’t seen GL in a while. Furthermore, I don't know when I can post.. My exams will be over around the 22nd of June, so I should be able to get back to full-time writing business around that time. Maybe I can get a part off the ground before that, but I prefer it if wgoddess wrote her part first.

@Dem: I don't think there's anything wrong with your story itself, it's rather the way you told it. I think you're giving us more of a summary (i.e.: Stan says, Demorte asks, Stan replies, Demorte says, Stan says, etc.) than that you're explaining how people feel, what they do, how the surroundings look, etc. But hey, that's what this thread is partially for, right? Learning how to write a story, get a bit of a fantasy feel, so forth. Also, there's no problem with your character. A bit of conflict within a group can always be nice, the same goes for the obvious comedy value.

Yeltsu · Post by **Yeltsu** » Sun May 29, 2005 9:56 am

Good news folks! after next friday I can come back and write! Then my last exam is over!

Sytze · Post by **Sytze** » Sun May 29, 2005 10:00 am

Then, hopefully, we can get this show on the road just like last year.

Yeltsu · Post by **Yeltsu** » Sun May 29, 2005 10:33 am

Yup

werebeargoddess · Post by **werebeargoddess** » Sun May 29, 2005 2:55 pm

I'm so happy.

We can actually continue this now.

School is officially over for me until fall, so I actually have loads of time to write now.

Yeltsu · Post by **Yeltsu** » Sun May 29, 2005 3:18 pm

Well, you can write a part now, and I'll write the next part after friday

werebeargoddess · Post by **werebeargoddess** » Sun May 29, 2005 9:53 pm

Sure, and we can restart the order from there.

Demortis · Post by **Demortis** » Mon May 30, 2005 1:20 am

ok, thanks Sytze, i thought no one was wanting to write becuase of the way i wrote.... oh well, ill try and do better next time.

and so ill write after Yelt, good to see things getting started again

time for me to come up with smart ass comments and wise sayings